Time to Change - Comments

I dont just love this story, I'm in love with it. Now I'm going to read the whole thing again.

I just read this and the prequel all in one sitting and they were both fabulous okay wow just wow

first , jesus this is so fucking cute omg . dying here & then holy shit her dad is there too ..

their relationship is killing me . god they both love each other ! just be togetherrrrrrrr.
amazing so far (:

this is such an amazing story <3

Yup. Loved this one too! :)

Now that I've finished reading A City of Fools and this one I just have to leave you a comment, making sure you know how amazing both of them are.
I'm absolutely in love with them, not just because of the plot, which is well thought of and keeps you reading, but also because of your writing style that keeps me wanting more once I've read the first two lines! :D

You probably already know how much I enjoy all of your stories since I've told you after each one I read, but I still feel the need to tell you again and again! :)

AHHHHHHHH!
WHEN DID THIS END!
I DID NOT RECEIVE AN EMAIL
I MAY NEED TO SHOOT SOMEONE!

Trish, this story, including A City Of Fools, is and was, as I'm sure you will already know, my favourite story on our evil friend Mibba, who does not let us post profile comments without errors.
You and the way you write are freaking AMAZING. The detail you put into characterisation, settings, moods, emotions and feelings is just brilliant and beautiful.
Throughout both the prequel and the sequel you had me laughing, tearing up, and getting lost in a world so marvellously created. Eli's my best imaginary friend, Alex is that friend you sometimes want to punch in the face for being so mysteriously awesome yet ignorant as fuck. He really opened up in this story though, coming to terms with his feelings and I fucking love that for once it wasn't the girl chasing after him.
Jack and Lauren just complimented the whole story, and James was the stupid antagonist that ruined everything, and irritated the shit out of me, yet at the same time pulled Eli and Alex together, and so I never thought I'd say this, but I love him too.

Your witty lines and snappy remarks interpreted into characters would always have me giggling and made everything seem so real.

So in basic terms; you deserve a standing ovation for this masterpiece, and one of these days I have no doubt that you will be a published author.

Love you and your stories, and your English boy, heapsss, hahaaaa
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AH I'm so sad it's over! I fell in love with this story! I really did! I think Alex and Ellie's relationship was one of my favorite of allll time in a story! It was just so fucking perfect. I think I m going to cry. i ...alksjflkakajfsjka
This was such an amazing story and you are an amazing writer with a mind of gold! Ic an't wait to read more stories! Congratuations on the completion of an awesome story <3

My dear, don't hate me, because I loved reading this, but I feel like the last chapter happened waaaay too quickly. It just felt like it kind of jumped around a bit - but overall, I do like how it ended a little open-ended. Like yes they're together, but they're also kind of just seeing where it goes. I think that's true to life, no solid or clear answers. Superb job and can't wait to read the next one!

I love the ending! And as much as I would love a sequel I agree with you. You should do a sequel, they story is finished here, it's done. It's like the perfect ending, and you shouldn't continue a perfect ending.

So sad it's over, this and the prequel are two of my three all time favorite stories here on Mibba. <3

:D

The end was perfect, I admire how it was like the prequel, when it was done, it was done. You didn't tried to drag out anything and tied all loose ends. It was absolutely perfect, just like the whole story. Sweet, short, cute, and simple. Amazing

This was great.
I can't wait for your next Alex story, if there will be one.
I hope so, I love your writing!

Lovedb it so much.
I wish it wasn't ending, they are so cute together.
... If I gave you twenty dollars... Would you write a sequel then? :P
My offer stands! Just sayin'...
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This was my favorite story. im so sad that its over... :(

This was my favorite story. im so sad that its over... :(

This was my favorite story. im so sad that its over... :(

love the update :D

Awwww, I'm so sad that this is over. Very sweet ending though. Thanks for an amazing story that I was always looking forward to. :)