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  • The Anti-Drama Queen

    The Anti-Drama Queen (100)

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    Wow, if this is for an entry for a contest they should vote you for first.

    Like usual, you're really good at detail.

    It's good that there was no dialogue or- in my opinion- would have messed it up a little.

    Good job :)
    August 30th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • lackadaisicaljunkie

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    e.e that/was/so/cute!!!!!!!!

    oh my goodness.

    Short and sweet. It was perfect :) Nicely done.
    August 24th, 2010 at 01:42am
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