I like this. It's different and I like Andrew. He makes me think of my friend Will. Georgia kinda' gets on my nerves though, but not too bad. :/ I guess it's kind of the whole "I'm gonna' fucking say 'fuck' every fucking other sentance." mindset that she seems to have. I think it's a bit much.
She does, however, remind me of the ladies of The Runaways, especially Cherie. :D Which is good.
Also, your style gets a bit repetitive in some places. Like, "Her right arm was dangling off the couch and her short legs were hanging off the too small couch." You could just as easily say "Her legs and right arm dangled off of the too small couch." Saying couch twice and describing each limb seperately is a bit much.
I do love that you're writing and original bandfic. I've been looking for one for a while.
Lol xD I actually this was about teenage porn stars...like you know...about porn ?! Sadly that was why I came here in the first place xD But don't worry , I actually really do love this story ! I love Georgia , she's amazing <3 Kinda reminds me of myself actually xD
Oh my god, an ORIGINAL band fic?! DUDE these are my favorite kinds of stories, and lemme tell you out of all the ones I've read yours easily makes it in the top 3! Like LadySin said, she's funny and kick ass.
It had got christened as the bathtub when one day Georgia filled it up with water and placed a rubber ducky in it. i really like that line... just do :]