To Make It Better - Comments

Brb - flailing over the adorable and unique layout.

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We need more new, cool layouts like that.

Sorry 'bout the fangirling. XD

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D: Oh, ouch. She cut herself? Silly girl. *hugs*

Denial? No, anger. Right. So, I'm guessing her heart was broken or something.

OH, I GOT IT. I think. It's getting interesting.

=/ Don't we all know that feeling?
I love how you're getting her emotions across quite brutally.

(: And she's strong again.

LET US REJOICE!

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Okay, so this was really, really good. Short, but the emotions were put into my face, like, FEEL THIS! and I did. I respect authors who can make someone feel something, because that's why we read, no?

Fabulous job.

I really enjoyed this. It was short but it was too the point which I hoped someone would find in it.
Excellent job.

This guy that she kept hurting herself over obviously took her for granted and just straight up used her. Every girl deserves better than that. :/

This kind of made me sad, but then obviously happy, 'cause she's gonna stop hurting herself over him. (:

Wonderful job, m'dear.
<3

Automatic Loveletter ftw!!!

I actually really like the story. It fits great with the song. The whole "make up smered like paint on canvas" thing was amazing.

:}

This is gorgeous. Like, super-amazing-fantastical-smartly-brilliant. :)
Haha, I have an amazing vocabulary like that.<3

The only thing that my mind snagged on was the fact that you mentioned "clothes" instead of "clothing" in the beginning lines. To me, it sounds improper and it chops the flow. ) : But like I said, that may just be me. I'm crazy like that. :D

The layout was gorgeous. That little butterfly/rib cage/hot air balloon/basket was brilliant and oddly fit the story to me. (:

Like, Aluuu said, I hate guys who abuse girls. D: It's not cool at all. I like how she looked in the un-broken mirror, and yet, she's broken. It seems like an interesting swap since mirrors almost always equal beauty in most stories. And in the sadder stories, it usually ends up broken and battered. D:

I'm rambling now, teehee.
But seriously, nice job. :)

First, I really, really like the song you chose for this (: Second, the guy who caused everything to happen is such a jerk. I'd drop him like a hot potato. I hate guys who abuse girls :| I love the ending, though, like she's breaking away. Very inspirational!
Lovely job! <3