September 6th, 2010 at 07:07pm
Eep. I loved both parts. I really hope Dahvie finds her.
It probably helps I was listening to BOTDF while reading this.
I like how you did the two points of view as different stories it makes it easier to follow.
Elle
I know I said that about Catie too but it's true.
You could do a lot with their situation in the car.
Pulled over and given tickets, underage drinking, a whole lot of stuff.
Anyway, you're doing good with the updates nice job ^_^
Elle