The Roots That Tied to My Feet - Comments

I'm so proud of you! haha good job boo boo!

OH MY GOSH! dskjfaklsdhglkdsdjaf I don't know where to start.
I loved the beginning and how John is so sweet to her and then how the song played in. I usually don't like when people put songs in like that, but hngg that was amazing. You are really good at writing things that I usually don't like in stories and make me just drool and fall in love. It's absolutely amazing writing. ESPECIALLY how you tied in the running thing at the end. It was just sooo perfect!! asjlkfjsakl GAHH
I can't wait to see what happens next!

It's just really hot when John gets defensive, haha.
Loved the update! Be sure to make the last chapter extra long! : )

omg the beginning was sooo cute, its meant to be with John.
the ending was so funny,
loved this chapter
i dont want this to end it'll be sad

she has to be with johnnnnnnnnn!

That was a amazing chapter. Her and John are meant to be together and are perfect for each other. I so do not like Ben. Team John all the way. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

XD!

So I just got caught up. I thought the bachelorette party was cute. I loved how the moms began to grind too, but I thought the part where Melanie was exclaiming about how Haley worked her hips was the best. I figured she'd go to John after; Melanie doesn't love Ben, even if she desperately doesn't want to hurt him. He really probably is the better choice, but he isn't the one for her.
I loved how Melanie kept feeling the soreness between her legs, not only as a constant reminder of
"John-ohhhhhh" but because it forces to her face the fact that he provides her with more passion. She told Ben she was a virgin for goodness sakes. Sure, he knows the truth, but he isn't getting anything from her and John is. But that fight they had over her was pretty hot. But I don't think running is going to do anything.

She has to end up with John- she has to! I cannot wait for the last update!

I am going to be so pissed off if she doesn't end up with John. After all they've been through, and all the confusion, just PLEASE let them end up together. It'll be hard enough facing the fact that the story is over, but to have her choose NEITHER of them is just criminal.

make it a good ending.
please.
let her go with john, not ben or anyone else for that matter.
i'm pretty much begging.

i love this story a lot & i can't even explain it.

ahhhhhhh. not going to lie, i will be so disappointed if she doesnt end up with john omg.

Dude, there are no words.
It all just happened and.....OH MY GOD.
Yeah, I see her going with John. Why didn't Melanie try to stop them fighting, though?

I love your story! I'm sad that it's ending :(.
JOHN OHHH! :D

Oh, my, freaking, goodness.
All I have to say is - Melanie better pick John!
That, and, you're story is simply amazing!
I love it to pieces<3

I thought it got better ! This is worse, not better ! Ughhh.

...update soon, pleasssse.

oh my god, that was rather eventful O_o. John had every right to stick up for her like that, Ben didn't need to call her a slut, because she isn't. But oh my gosh, she's gone again...can not wait for the next updaate. This story is amazing! :')
xxx

i hope she comes back to john! they are so cute together! :D xx

She ran?Mygad. I DID NOT SEE THAT PART.

well. I'm pretty sure she'll come back to John. I mean with all the hot singing of, 'please please baby come back,' she will totally come back. I mean, how can she not?

That sexxy singin. Too orgasmic. LOL!

Like fuck ketely. What was that all about? I suffocated. I can’t breathe with your story. Darnit. That was breath-taking. John was HOT I must say. Well Melanie, wasn’t that much of a slut. ( Because she was doing it with John, so I was pretty ok with it ) And I loved it when you included Right Girl there. It fitted so well with the story, that I could picture myself as a witness in the wedding rehearsal. And to think, I can’t put myself in Melanie’s shoes right now. I can’t decide big decisions. I have decidophobia, so yeah.
But good job! As always Ketely. You always surpass my expectations. You better update soon. =))) Like really soon. <3 Don’t leave me hanging ok K?