Joey Armstrongs little scam... - Comments

Thanks, I'm trying to update as much as possible with the time that i have, which isn't much. What was your favorite part to the chapter?

Cool that you updated again :)

This was an awesome update!! i can't wait for more@ xD

<3 Crystal

I really like it besides the grammar errors. Spelling just bothers me >.< Please update :D

Like i said i realized that know. lol

Adrienne's name isn't spelled 'Addrienne', and Jakob's name isn't spelled 'Jacob'. Other than that, it's fine. You have a lot of grammar errors you should correct, but I do enjoy the story line.

Good Luck!
Remus.

Oh my god please write more its amazing.

ill try im dissconected alot!!

Plz update

more please

You did a very good job.
You write fantastic.
But there were some repetiotions.
But I totally fall in love with it.
Great story
Please go on

Still to get to the meat of the story but there are a lot of major spelling errors that need addressing!

good job fixing the first chapter. Waiting for more chapters to come :)

I like it :)

read it now! what you think? the first chapter is longer i wont start the second chapter until u read it i need to know weither to stop or keep going...

this chapter was far to short to know what the story is about. Ill hit subscribe, id like to know more. Youll def need longer chapters for people to be interested in your story.
Hope my insight helps you in creating a brilliiant story.