I'd love to read about Jordan's few minutes with her. How sorry he is and everything. I wold also love too see flashbacks of her and Jordan. I want to get to the bottom of why he really hates his sister. Oh and more Baby Staal moments, please. Jared is my favorite Staal, and I love reading about him. :)
I am so happy you updated! I adore this story and just really want things to work out. I hope she wakes up and Jordan gets a wake up call. Loved the update!:)
This chapter was amazing. I had tears in my eyes at the beginning when Eric was talking to her. I'd really just like to see her wake up (hopefully!) and see what happens then. You are truly an amazing writer. (:
this is a great story=) who wouldn't want to be a staal's little sister? but at the same time, i feel bad for Jordan. I mean, it's not as if he was the one who put his sister in the hospital. He's already guilty about saying what he said to her but it feels like they're also making him feel guilty because she's in the hospital too. It just seems a bit unfair though.