Cold as Clay - Comments

An excellent, interesting piece!
I love the way you write, there's something so unique about it. It's just so special.
I loved this piece, I thought you wrote this unique idea brilliantly.
I thought your descriptions were brilliant.
And I agree, this should be longer
Great job.

Good job, you never cease to amaze me with your writing skills.

I think you should make this a series, it could be like the movie Taking of Palham 123 (or whatever the title is).

As I read it I could picture it happenning in real life (because it does), it's realistic and not all sappy and fan-fiction like.

Kudos to you.

If you decide to make it a story then tell, me I will subscribe.

:O

You should really consider continuing this as a story. It's really interesting and I would love to read more :D

Good job.