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I've Got Your Runaway Smile in My Piggybank, Baby. - Comments
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duuuuddeeee upppddaattteeeeNovember 15th, 2012 at 04:10am
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I just read both of the stories for this and I fell in love and hope you finish it.
I feel so bad for Jordyn and Jack :'(
are we going to find out who the stalker was?May 22nd, 2012 at 09:24am -
Thats so damn sad but I want to like hug her.
I liked it!March 12th, 2012 at 01:56am -
awwwwwh ]:March 11th, 2012 at 02:22am
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I wanted to cry during this. So sad.February 5th, 2012 at 08:06am
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Aww sad stuff and stuff and cuteness and sad...
I'm so bad with words...at early hours of the morning.
That was really cute. I love them :D...
It feels wrong to put a smiley face after so much sad cuteness.February 5th, 2012 at 07:51am -
<3January 15th, 2012 at 11:43pm
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this is amazing. i wasnt too fond of the prequel, but something kept drawing me in so i kept reading, and im glad i did. this is getting intense. *subscribed* <3December 13th, 2011 at 03:59am
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Sadness abounds. Oh my gosh this is heartbreaking. I could only skim over Jordyn talking in the hospital...so sad.
Please update soon!December 6th, 2011 at 08:37pm -
That was really sad
Real tears graced my eyeballs
That would be horrible.
Omg
So sad.December 4th, 2011 at 07:31am -
aww omgDecember 4th, 2011 at 04:40am
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Oh dear!
How sad....and good....but sad.
o: jack is gonna be someones prison bitch...heheh
;)November 11th, 2011 at 07:37am -
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD
SHE LOST THE BABY AND JACK IS GOING TO JAIL
AND I WANT TO KNOW WHO THE CREEPER IS
AND EVERYTHING IS IN PIECES
PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR I MIGHT CRYNovember 10th, 2011 at 05:05am -
ahh please update soon!November 8th, 2011 at 05:01am
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A Jack baby! I like Jack babies.October 25th, 2011 at 02:17am
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OMG! please let he be okay! Update soon <3October 24th, 2011 at 10:28pm
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OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD
UPDATE RIGHT NOW
I CAN'T DEAL WITH THIS
IT'S TOO MUCHOctober 22nd, 2011 at 05:49pm -
Aw babies are cuteeee
Ugh It is sooo much easier to read on this layout now.
I'm glad I fixed it.
I actually forgot I fixed it so it was weird to read on. But Easier.
I love them.
This story is fabulous.
LOVE YOU
<3September 20th, 2011 at 03:00am -
Alex, Mickee, Alexie and Markie are the cutest family I have ever seen/read about.
Please update soon! :DSeptember 19th, 2011 at 04:52am
But this definitely has a different plot line than a lot of stories I've seen, particularly going back to the plot line it started with in the prequel, and I want to commend you for the original idea. :)
And as miniscule as this factor probably is, I think both layouts suit perfectly. Like, the background of each. I feel like it fits the theme of the story. While all layouts should do that, a lot don't or authors just don't really bother with one. So kudos; that's probably something really lame to point out but I liked that factor. lol.
I may just have to check out some of your other stories. :)
Once again, you're a great writer. And I'm hoping maybe by leaving this comment it'll help you consider coming back to this again, or maybe inspire you to write more for it. Idk, it's just a thought. But I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know people like me are still stumbling across this and enjoying it. :)
I will be here if you ever, someday, choose to continue it. But if you don't, I can understand that too.