I've Got Your Runaway Smile in My Piggybank, Baby. - Comments

  • emmarulez

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    Aweee the twins are so cute. And Alex and Mickee are adorable with them.
    September 19th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Seriously, this whole stalker thing is freaking me out!
    August 18th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • lizziemcgenius

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    OH MY GOD I CANNOT DEAL WITH THIS THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME
    what a creep. "i'll be waiting." gives me the heebie-jeebies

    please update soon! :D
    August 18th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Ambny

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    Creepy stalker creepin on poor Jo.
    :P I know who it is I know who it is!
    I know whats gonna happen. la la la la la
    It makes me feel like a VIP
    Not gonna lie.
    Lmfao
    Loved it!
    LOVE YOU.
    farewell.
    <3
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it <3
    August 4th, 2011 at 04:05pm
  • lizziemcgenius

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    can we just leave it here with the cuteness
    i almost forgot that there was a creeper/stalker until she mentioned it
    well not really but i like the cuteness
    the stalker part freaks me out
    at least she has Jack to protect her.

    please update soon! :D
    August 3rd, 2011 at 04:09am
  • Ambny

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    Awww How cute are they! I just want to cuddle them
    OH HEY ITS MY CAT'S BIRTHDAY!
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEXTER!
    Sorry I got distracted cause I looked down at the corner of my screen and saw the date.
    ANYWAY...
    I love them, and how adorable they are.
    I feel so bad for Jordyn she seems so scared.
    I would be scared.
    I would go ninja on that stalker and kick his ass.
    He'd be all "NO DON'T HURT ME I LOVE YOU"
    And I'd be all "EAT THIS LEAD PIPE DOUCHE BAG!"
    Idk where I got a lead pipe from...
    but I had one...and the stalker died.
    <3
    I LOVE YOU
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:23am
  • lizziemcgenius

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    OH MY GOD it's like 2:30 a.m. and it's all dark outside and i'm FREAKING OUT because of this creeper guy
    i feel so bad for Jordyn and i'm even scared for her because of all this
    i hope she doesn't get hurt. or anyone else, for that matter.

    please, for the love of God, update soon! D:
    July 8th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • Ambny

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    That's so freaking creepy.
    Poor jordyn.
    I think I would like lock myself in a room and never come out I would that scared
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:43pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Poor Jo, OMG this is so creepy! I'm glad she has Jack to protect her.
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • emmarulez

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    Holy shiiit. Chreepy. O_o
    June 30th, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • LetsBeSquids

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    You. Should. Update. Quickly . Thanks(:
    June 26th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • lizziemcgenius

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    OH MY GOD WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU DO THAT.
    ALEX AND JACK AND EVERYONE NEED TO COME AND SAVE THE DAY.
    ZACK AND RIAN COULD BEAT PEOPLE UP. (is Rian even in this story? i can't remember. and a vaguely remember Zack being in it...oh well.)

    please please PLEASE update soon! i don't want Jordyn to die! she and Jack have to have Lebanese babies!
    June 25th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • Ambny

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    Oh no!
    Oh no!
    Jordyn is gonna die!
    but I love her!
    That was so creepy it made my skin crawl thinking about being followed.
    It's totally happened to me before and it was horrible, but like they weren't actually following.
    I want the boys to come save them!
    Except idk if I would feel safer with Jack...
    I mean I might but he looks pretty tiny.
    Maybe if you gave him a gun, and like grenades...
    No thats a horrible idea!
    Do Not Give Him Guns And Gernades
    EVERYONE WOULD DIE!
    Could you imagine!
    Who would be stupid enough to give him those!
    And like dude if we were playing a videogame and her was on my team...
    I probably wouldn't feel safe either!
    And videogames are not real life no matter how much I might wish they were!
    Also Jordyn is cute with children.
    So is Mickee but I have different tastes in colors then her
    Cause if I had twins one would be yellow and the other would be orange or blue or green or something
    I hope this message makes up for your lack of commenters.
    Since I know it makes you sad
    I tried to make this one fun and exciting
    (Even though I was just writing my thoughts as I thought them)
    :D
    <3 Amber
    June 24th, 2011 at 07:38am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    This is creepy! Update soon please <3
    June 24th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it <3
    June 8th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • lizziemcgenius

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    i fell in love with Dirty Work last night.
    i was ready to make my mom drive me all over town to find it.
    first place we looked, only like three had been bought.
    i guess most north carolinians don't like atl as much as i do.

    anyway, great chapter, as always. i got to "baby, don't yell," and freaked out. i was like "THAT'S UNDER A PAPER MOON!" good thing i'm home alone.

    please update soon! :D
    June 8th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • Ambny

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    Oh dear!
    Poor Alex.
    Now more Jack
    he is hot
    and pretty
    and slightly odd
    and I think he may be a lesbian in disguise.
    June 8th, 2011 at 07:07am
  • lizziemcgenius

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    “Asseligjeeah!” the baby yelled, his facial expression reading that he meant business.
    “I think he just called you an asshole,”


    sex and babies. my two favorites.
    hands down my favorite chapter.

    please update soon! :D
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • emmarulez

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    lmao. "I think he just called you an asshole."
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:56pm