Zacky and Grace - Comments

This was very realistic! Plus, cute. :) I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more (if there is more? xD) Good story!

I didn't like the layout at all, it was way too bright and the picture's didn't seem to have much of a position.

The summary wasn't very appealing, either. It could use a lot of work if you want to attract readers for this story.

I also don't like A7X very much so I didn't like this. (nothing personal.) It started off okay but then it just seemed all over the place. The flow wasn't very continuous and you should try and not use so much tags. Also, you need to brush up on your writing skills. It's all very bland and plain.

This story would have been an enjoyable read but you the summary, layout and your writing style made it boring for me. Sorry.

I totally agree with Alexander Bernadotte and Alvarittsixx.
You captured the whole I-like-you-so-I-think-I-love-you thing that happens with most kids that age pretty nicely. And again, I just love love love your writing style. <3

It was really really cute to read. Great job man, and good luck in the round. (:

Avenged Sevonfold and I are so not friends. I really can't stand anything I read about them, I don't listen to them but they seem to own this site and it just bugs me.

Having said that, this story still didn't do much for me in the aspect of improving my likeness for this group.-at least fanfics about them. The layout was kind of bleck, too wide and bold for me. The pictures were kind of everywhere and I just wouldn't have chosen this myself.

The story was just a spurt of tmi, I mean, this is supposed to be found out throughout the story I thought? Not all at the beginning, the writing was okay, I think you could work on your flow and descriptions a bit.

Hope that helps.

I actually really liked it. To be honest, the opening was iffy for me 'cause I don't like when characters start telling every little thing about themselves. Still, as I read one, I couldn't believe how sweet and adorable it was, heeee. <3 Very well done. :D

I like how after all that freakin' confusion, they kiss. (:

The first kiss of a couple are always my favorite part. : D

I really liked this. It was a cute, real-like, high school confusion of feelings type of story. Sorry if that didn't make any sense. xD My eyes and head hurt. :/

But, I wish you luck in this contest. (: You truly did a wonderful job with the basic I-Like-You feelings and characters.

It was really sweet. <3

Wonderful job.
<3

Not a fanfic/AX7 fan at all, but this is adorable! I liked the opening sentence. I live in Vegas too, haha! I think we're all considered weirdos over here, so you got that part right xD Zacky seems so innocent when he talked to Grace. It's so cute and funny to read.
I like the ending (: It was so adorable! [Yeah, I used adorable, like, ten times here, haha!] This was a very cute read. Lovely job! <3