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@ RedRomRomance
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed the fluffiness after all was revealed! :D

That was.... and just..... *drowns in the beautifulness that is this story*

I kept guessing what it was that was off in this story. Not in a bad way but something was nagging at the back of my mind. Something was..... missing.

And then BAM!!

I FIGURED (It told us) IT OUT AND I WAS LIKE 'WWWAAAAAAHHHHHHHH???!!!!' AND THEN 'AWWWWWW' AND IT WAS 'YAAAAAYYYY' AND JUST AWESOME.

And so cute and fluffy I'm going to suffocate happily.

Love,
RedRomRomance

@ RayTorosArmy
Random, but now that I came to read your message, I saw that I wrote 'blond' instead of 'blind' in my previous reply and just....LOL. Gave it a whole new meaning.

@ Yekith
No totally, I get that. It was like, so shocking that I was seriously happy. I love that you know something is special as a reader, but you can't quite place your finger on it. It's perfect, really.

@ RayTorosArmy
Thank you! :) It was hard to not give it away that they were blond from the start. But I couldn't use any visual description, which was weird.

My mouth is like to the floor. Oh my God. I am like gasping like "OH MY GOD." Y'know what, this is perfect omg. I was like "ok why would gerard be worried that much.." and like THE LIGHTS! I WAS SO CONFUSED AND THEN FRANK IS BLIND OMF I CANNOT. IT'S MADE ME SMILE AND IT'S AMAZING. JESUS.

Livejournal needs some practice to get used to, for sure. Commenting is easy, you just gotta find the comment button at the bottom of the main post. A lot of people have it edited so it says something else other than "leave a comment", but it's always the second option under each entry. Posting is a different matter, not even easy to explain, it's better to practice on your own journal/read the tutorials some communities have. I agree with you that Mibba's system is so much easier, and you can also find stuff more easily (in Livejournal the only way is to join communities and follow them). However, I notice quality is usually higher on Livejournal since community mods don't accept fics that are terribly written. You know, when it's obvious that they just wrote a few paragraphs in the act and didn't even bother to reread or spell check? Other than that, they won't judge whether you're a good writer of course, but you have to at least put some effort to present your story.

I think it takes more than what you have used of cliche elements to make your writing cliche. Happy endings in love stories are considered cliche, but that doesn't mean that a happy ending can't come about in a surprising and delightful way that makes a reader happy.

Anyway :)

I found you on Live Journal the other day, but I suck at that site and don't even know how to comment on your stories there -.-

I tried. I liked the story of yours that I found.

It took me a lot of tries just to figure out how to READ stuff on there. And I can never find what I want to lol. Mibba is so much easier, but it has it's limitations I guess. I do remember when I used to bookmark stories that I liked on Mibba because I didn't even know about subscribing. . . yeah. Some teenager demanding "Comment and Subscribe!" in their author's note saved me a lot of trouble. So maybe Live Journal will get easier :P

I only write on Mibba right now because I find the layout and submitting of stories easier here, but I'm Annalia51 on LJ.

Good to know! I think I AM usually kind of cliche, can't help it. I think I just like some cliche elements too much. I do try to add something that will make the stories different from many others, which is hard without forcing myself to write something that's not my style. Like, for example, big dramas/tragedy are not my thing, can't write them. Being true to my style limits my possibilities, I must admit.

Thank you! :)

I really like this. I think it's amazing. At first I wasn't sure what it was going to be about and I was hoping that it wouldn't be cliche, but I have read some of your other writing so I had high hopes lol. It turned out to have your originality and sweetness, so I wasn't disappointed :)