New Jersey: Coffee, Sex & Cigarettes - Comments

And that right there is intense shit!
Great intense shit!
Here's what we've been waiting for kiddlings!
Let the maddness start!!!

I caught up with your story! Yay! Sorry i haven't commented back on your page, darn Mibba wont let me on my phone. -_- But, i love these chapters, and i want more. But i'll wait cause i has to. Love you too!

Whoa.
Frank knows...And guess what? He didn't run away like Kat thought he would. I suppose his love confession before she had said ANYTHING was a good chance to blurt it out. I'd have chose that time, but I'm usually not that spot on when it comes to good timing. I usually wait until I'm trapped with the person who is yelling at me with rage....and it's usually terrible news I have to tell. HAHA I say.

Frank is so fuckin awesome right now. And Kat needs to accept all of him wholly, no doubts anymore. I can't wait until Zak realizes...although he probably already imagines Frank as his Dad. Awe, how sweet.

Oh and before I forget, Thank you for thy lovely comment you sent. I'm glad you loved it. Sadly, I don't have a follow-up comment to supply you with this time. Just lots o' love..

Amazing Chapter as always
Can't wait for the next Chapter
And...
...Happy Christmas.

~Angie :]

I'm finally back to comment for ya! I'm so sorry for not commenting in like forever, but I've been really busy moving back to Norway from Oregon and stuff!

I still love all your stuff, and I want to comment on every chapter, but I won't 'cause we're about to leave. So I'll just let you know that I loved all of them, but I'll just comment on this last one.

I still love the way you write; the amount of detail in every sentence and the emotion loaded in every word is just awesome! I love how this chapter held so much different emotion; hurt, denial, insecuirity, fright and love. It's amazing how you always make the people who read feel the same as the characters you write about. I'm sitting here with a happy, but slightly unsure feeling about what's about to happen further on, with frank knowing and everything.

Frank's 'speech' was so amazingly written! Oh my god, that was incredibly intense and just... wow. How he just blurted everything out. I never would have thought Frank would have said something like that, especially with the characteristics and personality you gave him in this story. That's pretty good!

I like Kat's emotions too, and I lovelovelove how she told Frank about Zak, and then kind of pointed out how 'stupid' Frank was for not noticing. Mhm. And Frank's reaction - kissing her like that - put the incredible in the chapter.

It was just all in all an awesome chapter and I can't wait for more!

Please update soon, love. An Merry Christmas!

Loveh Teyana

:O xD ^_^ :) Soooooo stoked that he finally knows!!!!!!!!! PLEASE tell me that she tells him that she loves him back!

PS- I hate all rap except Eminem, old school Ludacris & a few old school Nelly songs that were popular in like 2001 *nods* Been a fan of Eminem since I was 9 years old lmao

Oooh shits about to hit the fan, I can just feel it. Of course she loves him too...something's gonna happen though. Howeverrrr. Great chapter!

LOVE the updates!!!! I'm so happy that she told him finally about Zakary!!!! I can't wait for more! This story, plus your random and awesome comments, makes me laugh. Love it. So much.
Update again soon please!!!!
And Happy Holidays!

You are a beautiful person.
And an amazing writer.
It's Christmas were I am, so MERRY CHRISTMAS.
This made my life.

AW THAT'S THE CUTEST PICTURE OF FRANK EVER!
I 'aw'ed so loud my step-mom mimicked me from downstairs xD
But I loved it!
I hope they you know... stay like this. ;)

HEY HO. Merrrrrrrrrry Christmas EVEEEEE. that was an amazing present. i loved it. made me squeal. a geniune squeal. teehee. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXFABULOUS

Me thinks that you and I would get along swimmingly *nods* We like all the same stuff AND we both stay up til 5 am lmao

I am really enjoying this chapter, update soon?

Those kids *shakes head* What can I say, I would've jumped his bones, too. I heart the pic. He does look completely stoned and I, myself, don't think he would mind. lol Great post, can't wait for the next.

That picture gives a 'come and fuck me' vibe, I thought you'd point that out, Kat, ahaha :)
But I have a theory why that picture is so fucking attractive - his eyebrows. JUST LOOK AT THEM.
Anyway. Ahem.
That update made my life. Right now, I'm as sick as a dog, I bet it's swine flu - but this update made me happy as fuck. I bet there's sexy times in the next chapter? ;) xo

I hope she starts accepting the idea of Frank wanting to be with her soon!

I'm curious, when will she tell Frank?
:)
Good story, good plot. :)

Potato. Haha anyway yeah. They should totally have a sexy party! XD Anyway keep it going yo! Lol I'm gonna get off this Dsi because it's messing up my letters when I write them in. ha! Later! XD

I fucking love this story.
I fucking love your author notes and they make me want to fucking comment...but leave me under this pressure to leave some catchy, clever line of some sort...which I don't have sadly.

She really should accept that Frank means business, and not just sexy business (although I'm sure it's greatly appreciated), but serious business...and I think we all know that Frank better not be fooling otherwise he will get some shit from our invisible forces....

You know, I love that picture of Frank too and I never thought that he could be stoned out of his mind. And I can't believe I never thought of it because he definitely looks baked...but who cares, perfect everything on that man. No denial.

But other than that, love the chapter!!!
Ready for some sweet loving in the next chapter, maybe?
I love it when Frank spends time with Zak. They're are so freakin' adorable together!!

Update when you can. Personally I can wait because this story is so good :]

~Angie

OK, normally I'm not one for reading Author's Notes but yours crack me up so bad. The pictures of Frank are a plus, though. :) Keep up the frickin' awesomeness?

awh, i loved this chapter. haha, buzz kill. XD
and you are so so so right about the photo of Frank.
it is attractive. very attractive.
:D

Sexy time soon?