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  • Loud Papers

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    Aww, she took him home how cute ! I lovee this story and the party should be interesting.
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:02am
  • outthewindow.

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    This is lovely.
    Another chapter soon?
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • chewy...

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    That was probably my favorite chapter so far:D I don't really know why, I just really liked it.
    She's gonna go to the party?! awhhyeah.
    Can't wait for the next update. :3

    & a Josh Franceschi one shot? don't mind if I do, I'm gonna go read it now.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • cantcontainit

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    I do love a handy excuse for snooping.
    aaaaaaaaand that he grew on her.
    and that she's a big softie and took him home.
    aaaaaand I still hate small dogs.
    aaaaaaand she's going to a party with him.
    aaaaaand I'm excited.
    ok.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    It was actually a really good chapter and rather realistic in that she didn't go all psycho when she found the pictures in the kitchen. I'm still curious as to what the deal is with the girlfriend, so I'm pretty excited for the next chapter.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 09:47pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    I wanna know what the deal is with the girlfriend and all that.
    Still so stoked.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • Farrow

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    Dude, I'm seriously enjoying. Pretty realistic too - the way she didn't go all "Amanda Hater" on us when she found the pictures in the kitchen. Thank you for that, really, haha.

    I'd love an update soon? :)
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:15pm
  • kahlo

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    Fillers are substantial.
    They give us space to work.
    I'm excited about the party.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 12:26pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    ahhh I love this!
    It's so much fun =]
    can't wait for the next update!
    January 3rd, 2011 at 11:11am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Probably my favourite part was Rose meeting Tom. That was classic. I like how you're shaping your characters already and not rushing anything.
    December 29th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    I CAN"T BELIEVE I DIDN"T SUBSCRIBE. GRR. No wonder. D:
    Tom, Tom, Tommy. What will we ever do with you. xD
    December 28th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • vices

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    This story is B E A UTIFUL!

    Love Oli, love the story(:
    December 28th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • DmK

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    sigh. right as it was getting good. lol

    omg but your story is paralleling my life!

    lol i go to college and I work in the library and deal with students just like Oli. And the old lady lol.

    I can't wait for more, I'm already in love with it!
    December 26th, 2010 at 11:45am
  • celinasmile

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    i love this! you're a great writer! <333
    December 25th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • Much Better

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    I just got a chancr to start reading this, but so far, i really like it
    December 19th, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • TayVengeance

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    :D yay! An update!!!! ^_^ i love this story.
    December 17th, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • Loud Papers

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    rose and oskar are gonna make fantastic friends.
    December 17th, 2010 at 06:34am
  • boycott love

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    this is addicting ;)
    December 17th, 2010 at 12:38am
  • cantcontainit

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    I really hate small dogs.
    December 16th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • soapy

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    finally you updated :D i am so pleased & it ended perfectly! i can't wait for you to get going with the next chapter woooooooooooo this story is going to be so good, im excited. awh, poor rose, i hope oskar is kind to her haha c: & ooh a shirtless oliver hmmm? nicely done! :D update again soon miss!
    December 16th, 2010 at 05:32am