Based on these comments I have come to the conclusion that I am the only guy to have read this story xD anyways, beautifully done. Please update soon. Can wait to read more :)
Hmmm... My guess would have to be his parent's corpses coming back to life??? Yeah that guess sucks I know. I haven't watched the movie in forever though. By the way I like the dialog that you have between Riley and Jim.
I sort of hated that movie. It was so damn frustrating and sad and annoying. But you really made it a lot better, in my opinion. You are my new favourite writer ever. Can't wait to see what the new character is like!
I'm a huge fan of the movies, and your story portrays it a new light without it being overbearing. And Dallas? I'm incredibly sad! Poor Riley and Dallas. Oh and I love Jensen Ackles <3
So far I enjoy your story. Normally I do not like stories that are narrated through first person but your story is an exception. The story was able to grab my attention and you did a good job on the characters. I hope you continue with this.
I love your way of writing and I do agree with angel-in-training09. There are few people who can write a story and make me really imagine the scenario and you are now one of them
Hah I am that one suscriber, I'm a big fan of the movie. I was so excited to finally see a story for this (granted anything with Cillian Murphey gets me happy XD). Looks like an interesting story so far, can't wait to read more!