Wolf...No. Werewolf...Asked Me To Be His Mate - Comments

Well, for all of you who are waiting for me to update on here, I will not. I'm moving this story to Wattpad, mainly because it's a better site and has less rules. So if you want to read it, go there. Please don't be angry with me for this but I really don't like this site anymore.

http://www.wattpad.com/user/hannahwolfrhodes# so heres the link. I also have other stories on there that you may like.

So please go there for my stories, if you are still waiting for them :)

O.O love the new chapter =))) Im in so much suspense about what the alpha wants Zoey for. Im excited to see what happens next =)

Good but needs work.

Work On...
~Grammar
~Spelling
~Wording

Other...
~It seems very unplanned- not that this is necessarily bad just sometimes you lose track of the main plot developed at the beginning. Just have a sort of plan
~Be more descriptive if you can on things I think might help you.
~Some Parts are very obvious, try to make things sort of "un-obvious"

Good Things...
~Very Good Story
~(Noticed in Author Notes in Earlier chapters) but Zoey IS spelled RIGHT :)
~Cliff Hangers. I hate reading them but you know what I use them all the time because it hooks readers in and leaves them wanting to know what will happen
~It's a cute little story

It's good just minor things should be changed, but other than that, very good *Subscribed*

heyyy this is a really good story and you should update it!!!

I love the story. Please update soon

I absolutely LOVE your story!!! Its amazing! I couldn't tear my eyes away from it XD I hope the next one comes out soon =)))

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! YaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaYYYY!!!!!
New chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xD
Write faster and update asap!!!!

Love the story to just read through it and love it already!! keep going xxx

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THE STORY!!!! CAN'T BELIEVE I HAVEN'T COMMENTED YET!!!! ... or have I??? o.O?? xD but seriously... It's brilliant =D WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEE!!!!!

^_^ can I have the twin...rofl jkjk but really love the story and hope to read more soon^_^

Good! I would've commented sooner but it was my first week of school and I was hanging out with friends and I had some homework and it was hectic.

You are a creative writer. Keep it up!

i really love this story!! its amazing!

I enjoyed the story! Update soon please! Watch out for switching a with o and o with a!

I liked it. It's a bit jumpy with the details and the grammer's a tad off but those are things that eveyone has so it makes no difference if it's like that. I don't think you'll ge reported. It's a good story and it seems like you have an idea on where it's going as well as a firm plotline. Let me know if you'd like any help with any thing at all, like if someone reports you and I'll help you get back on your feet. Just make sure your story is backed up on another word processor so you don't lose your story. Mibba is just like quizilla sometimes and deletes stories that aren't up to par on their guidelines.
I did like it though, so please don't think I'm being mean, I'm just giving a small portion of advice and offering you any future help and advice you may need or want.

Also, I love the name Zoey and I never kne that was what it meant. My pup's name is Zoey and she is very full of life so I guess it suits her :)
I'm curious though, what do Bethan and Dani mean?

That was good! Update soon?

Dat last chapter was rrly cute i lyked it :)
update soon :D

its good! cant wait for more!
some of your words get mixed up which gets a lil confusing.

I knew the name 'Zoey' wasn't spelled wrong, it's one of the many ways of spelling it, I used to read the House Of Night series and that's how the author spelled it. These chapters were really good.

Great story! I didn't think any of the names were spelled wrong. I mean my name used to be spelled wrong until recently on word processor.

What did I do wrong?