Drinking Alone - Comments

I saw this on 'Pimpin' and Reccin' and I figured I'd check it out, and I loved it. The layout was so simple and kind of foreshadowing a little because when the narrator My liver can whine all it wants, but I don’t care. I thought of it as the liver crying out, telling the narrator to stop drinking but maybe that's not what it's supposed to be It was so simple yet so interesting and refreshing because you took an important topic (obviously alcoholism) and made it sound so not important, like it didn't bother the narrator and I really admired that.

That was amazing and well written.
I like how you went about it, standing strong for the point of the story.
I liked the whole thing very much.

Good luck!:]

Oh my gosh! I adore the layout. It's so simple, but the backgroud image is so amazing! Woah. I usually don't like stories to the right, but I think this one is great because of the genius layout.

This is absolutely amazing. I assume the narrator is an alcoholic. So they think that drinking will solve all their problems; which is why the person in the story is so happy drinking. I also like the repition of the word happy/happiness.

I didn't see any mistake or anything, so good job. You said a lot in only 131 words, which was great! This was a wonderful drabble that I quite enjoyed.