Freefall - Comments

great update!

I'd run with those boys...may not be able to keep up, but I'd do it.
Sports would become way more appealing, haha.
Loved it!
Update again soon!

i normally dont like paul stories, but this one's pretty good so far!
up date soon!

Very cute.
I've daydreamed about a guy in class before and totally zoned out.
LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh I'd love to make this story a banner, would you like one?
Just comment me or message me about it ASAP!
=)

I think Paul needs a little more hostility, but this was a very cute second chapter.
Looking forward to more!

Seem interesting so far.
I'll subscribe.
And the main character, I can relate too in some ways, which was pretty interesting.
Update soon please!
=)