First You Fall - Comments

I just found this story, I know I'm late. But WTF IT WASNT HER!! Okay, off to the sequel to see what happens next.
Oh yeah, I really liked the scene with her fighting Johnny. Made me laugh. And when she and Zacky made up after the four days of fighting. I loved it all actually.
Okay, I can't wait anymore. LOVE IT!

I just spent half an hour trying to find this story because I wanted to reread it but couldn't remember the title.

Holy shit.

I have to admit, I was a little iffy about reading this when a friend suggested it. It wasn't really anything to do with the story, I've just been very disappointed in almost everything I've read lately. I've become cynical and jaded lol. But, due to my current lack of a life, I sat down tonight and read the entire thing.

So here I am, at four in the morning, telling myself I should go to bed and not just rampage through the sequel.

I adored this. I thought it was a fresh take on, as you said, a somewhat cliched idea. I liked that she was just an ordinary girl that got involved in the life. And I loved that, no matter how much she liked or wanted Zacky, she never really gave into him. Toni stayed stubborn and continuously stood up for herself. I'm a sucker for a strong female character. Too often you see these cream puff, whiny girls that run off crying if someone says something mean to them.

And the ending! I have to say, I did not see that coming lol. I should have and knew something was going but I guess I didn't think about it good enough. Setting her up as a leak was magnificent. What better way to shake the empire than to destroy what means the most to the emperor? Genius.

So thank you for writing a story I actually enjoyed reading. In the morning I'm going to start the sequel. It'll give me a reason to drag myself out of bed lol.

I reall like this story and the fact that you made her half venezuelan was THE BEST!

I've just finished reading this story!! =D
It's so so good!
Can't wait for the sequel =D
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lol...Well you made it to 301 but just thought I'd say a few things...

This story was absolutely amazing!!

R.I.P. "First You Fall"

I'm truly gonna miss reading it and getting all the updates but I'm looking forward to the sequel because I know it's a new beginning of the ending to ths wonderful story.

I fell in love with this story the minute I read it, like seriously. I only wish I could have been here from chapter one to give you comments on every single chapter as they came like I do with the stories I'm currently reading. But unfortunately, I came across your story at a later time.

But it's okay, I'll be there to comment on every single chapter of the sequel. And that makes me happy.

There are very few stories that I fall in love with, and I want you to understand that. There's only like three, including yours. And yours is second best. I wish I could make an award for it.

I'm really gonna miss this story hon, but you did an excellent job!

I can't wait for the upcoming sequel!

How many times have I said that?

lol...Oh well, I'll leave now.

Terrific job!

Here's to "First You Fall", 302 comments, and the sequel that's in the making!!

Vengeance Princess~

just made it 301!!!!!

WOOOTT 300

i cant wait for the sequel !!!
this story was so amazing and i cant wait to see how its ends

poor dead computer

I have defiently enjoyed this story and can't wait for the sequel!
: D

I don't remember if i commented yet or not some insert comment here

haha

I'm so sorry about your lap top, may it rest in peace....my cell phone jumped into a puddle thinking that it was aqua man....but it died. I was seriously upset and now have a 'cellphoneasaurous'

but yeah.

YAY SEQUEL!! (whenever the sure to be amazing story gets out :D)

I don't know if I ever told you this...But I absolutely loved this story and cannot wait for the sequel! I was extremely sad when they broke up!! I really hope they get back together=]

i can't wait for the sequel.
this was my favorite story on mibba.
n.n

sequal now!

you other people better comment and get this up to 300! we at least owe her that for her awesome writing skills!

only ten more comments! woo!! i absolutely love this story and i seriously can't wait for the sequel!

haha hi
love ther story can't wait for the sequel

I'm so excited for the sequel!

I loved the story can't wait for the sequel