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  • Kissing.Sin

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    I nearly freaking cried
    Poor Toni
    Poor Zacky :(
    Oh my gooood hurry up with the sequel aha
    I wanna know if Zack finds out Toni WASN'T the snitch
    :(:(:(:(
    February 22nd, 2009 at 12:19am
  • silently.screaming

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    omg you cant end it there!!arrhh i need to know what happens!!
    oh my sequel soon please?!?
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:21pm
  • Cussing At Birds

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    This is seriously one of my favorite stories ever. I think ive read it 50 times no joke. Its soo depressing that its over.

    My favorite part was how zacky and toni got together.

    Please start the sequel soon! :]]
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:06pm
  • Jei-Ukime

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    loved it,

    great story,

    sequal please!
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • x-LyricalOneLiner-x

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    Holy. Shit.
    You suck!!!! (Not really)
    I cannot believe you just ended it there!!!!!!
    Oh my God!
    Sequel!!!!! Now!!!!!!!!!!
    Please?
    PS, you are a fantastic writer!
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • Jade19

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    NOOO killer ending love as much as it pains me to read it lol it was really good. and you should totally feel proud on your story i loved it. there better be a sequel lol you leave it like that :)
    February 21st, 2009 at 10:50pm
  • MissLis

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    I'm all speechless right now! and I'm serious!
    I don't know what to say right now it's all...

    what fuck?
    you can't just END it here?!
    doN't tell me this is like... over? now, cuz... hello?
    it can't just end there!
    please tell me you'll do a sequel!
    because..
    it just can't end right there!
    it just CAN'T!!!!!
    February 21st, 2009 at 10:48pm
  • Derpina.

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    This sequel is gonna be good :) I know that for sure.
    February 21st, 2009 at 08:15am
  • kristinvengeance

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    0.0 Jimmy better be okay!! OMG Can't wait for the last one in this part!! I'm convinced that the sequel be as bomb diggity as this one.
    February 16th, 2009 at 02:09am
  • lady.vengeance

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    ahhh, noooo! JIMMY! = (
    don't let him dieeee!!!!!!
    February 15th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • DeadxRosex

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    Oh My God I'm so excited for the sequel you are an awsome writer!
    February 15th, 2009 at 02:11am
  • J.A.R.

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    I will be totally P.O. if Jimmy dies :'-(....everyone makes Jimmy die...on a brighter note this is one of the most kick ass stories I've read so far and I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!
    February 14th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    but...but...but I love Jimmy!!

    my guess is that Toni ends up kidnapped and going totally badass on all of 'em and kills 'em all while saving Zack's name...cause that'd be cool. I like her and Zack together.
    February 14th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • Darkest Spells

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    nooooooooooooooooo whay Jimmy?!? WHY!?
    loved the updated.
    February 14th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • xXvengeance.loveXx

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    NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Not Jimmy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't Kill Jimmy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Other then that I love the story.
    February 14th, 2009 at 03:50pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    NO! not jimmy! if he dies i will...umm...DO SOMETHING DRASTIC!
    February 14th, 2009 at 02:28pm
  • iraisah

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    ok i have a theory: haha sorry i think it's an awesome plot with a great deal of potential anywayyss hihi
    February 14th, 2009 at 11:36am
  • bloodravyn

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    not jimmy!!!!
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:22am
  • musicsaveslives.

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    don't kill Jimmy:[

    is Johnny the leak?!?!!?
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:13am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    omg I love this
    aw I hope Jimmy's ok!
    February 14th, 2009 at 06:18am
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