I just started reading this and there are so many things I love about it already!
I love that Heather isn't a total bitch (the girlfriend usually is), and that niether Ben or Nick are 5ft tall and overly feminine (I have never seen a 5ft tall 18 year old guy), and they don't sit on each others laps and hold hands as friends (which is so unrealistic), and I love that they aren't "emo" (like the characters in most stories), I love that this story is actually original and realistic and believable...
There's more, but this comment is boardering on creeper lengths, so I should probably stop before I embarass myself. But I love this story so far, it's original and actually a story, like I could imagine reading something like this as an actual book. Can't wait to read more. :D
Oh, I liked it alot :D I think its very interesting and well-written! I just hope Heather isn't in the picture too long >.>... *cough* Oh, how Nick and Ben should be enclosed into a tight, dark space xD~ I hope the next chapter is soon, cuz i wanna read it! :D
I love that Heather isn't a total bitch (the girlfriend usually is), and that niether Ben or Nick are 5ft tall and overly feminine (I have never seen a 5ft tall 18 year old guy), and they don't sit on each others laps and hold hands as friends (which is so unrealistic), and I love that they aren't "emo" (like the characters in most stories), I love that this story is actually original and realistic and believable...
There's more, but this comment is boardering on creeper lengths, so I should probably stop before I embarass myself. But I love this story so far, it's original and actually a story, like I could imagine reading something like this as an actual book. Can't wait to read more. :D