August 28th, 2010 at 08:53am
Yo allen_walker, i kind of liked your story. I don't mean to offend you but i think it was a little obvious what was going to happen at the end. But high five to your vocabulary! and yeah i know, being 13 is hard. but don't give up!
-blue iris
Yea, its hard being 13 :) Thanks for the encouragement ! :D