Vampires - Comments

I love that you hinted and revealed things slowly but surely so we get what's going on with him but not fully and it's left with this "so . . . what's up with this boyfriend?" aspect, and I really love that. It was seriously amazing.

- This was awesome . O:

First of all, let me apologize for not reviewing this entry sooner.
I've been so incredibly busy with college, I've hardly had time for mibba.
So, this is way overdue and I'm sorry for that.
Onto the comment!

Thank you so much for submitting your entry to early into the contest.
I definitely appreciate that, and I'm sure my co-judge does as well.
Also, I liked the simplicity of your layout. It seemed to fit the tone of
your entry well, even though it was simple. But like I say, simple is always good. (:

Overall, I found this story to be entirely stunning.
Your plot idea was completely original, and unique.
You took the provided photo and turned it into a beautifully brilliant idea.
I thouroughly loved the haunting tune this played in my mind as I read,
and this entry definitely stuck out within my mind after reading.
The way you used your photo was just entirely unique, and I loved the idea behind it.
I wasn't expecting to read an entry about an insane person, but it fit this photo perfectly!
I'm a sucker for rather disturbing plotlines, and this certainly has become a favorite of mine.
Just brilliant. (:

I also didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues, as usual.
You always take the time to execute your stories stylishly and without common error.
Thank you so very much for proof reading this, it means a great deal to Britney and I.

I think this was my favorite line of all:
"We were the quietest little miracle shining inside a curled up leaf somewhere in the depth of the jungle. Our world was small, but we had all we needed."

So decriptive and revealing, and you employed wonderful imagery.

This entry certainly caught my attention from the beginning,
and held it through to the shocking yet brilliant ending.
All in all,
I very much liked this.
Your idea was beautiful and original,
and you certainly did a wonderful job with making the story revolve around your photo.
Great job. <3
and good luck!

Oh wow, that was kind of amazing.

I was so wrapped up in the details, you did well with those. Painting an image of shifting realities inside and outside his head. Well done. Definitely an interesting take on the picture too. Best wishes in the contest!