Every Hello Ends With A Goodbye - Comments

AMAZING! :) Just read it and loved it; it was really great. Emotional and filled with love. :) Kind of made it like a real life situation by showing that not everything's perfect when she told him what her life was like and what he told her about his. :) So, great job! :D

I liked how you included the song into your writing, it was a nice touch.
Overall, it had a strong story line and was to the point of the song. Well done.