A Million and One Feathers - Comments

I love that banner so much!
The millions of birds in it-it just looked so beautiful.
This was brilliant-I can so compare to this.
I really liked this.

I liked this a lot. Isn't it wonderful, how so few words can say so much? And that layout was wonderful. I spent as much time looking at it as I did reading =)

This is really sweet, in a sad way. It kind of reminds me of myself, sometimes. I really loved the paragraph about getting close to the cloud, and then it starts raining. The way you worded that part was beautifully expressive.

It inspires me, a little. I kind of want to write something building off of this concept...

The only thing is, the title doesn't quite tie in with the theme/concept of the drabble.

I gotta agree with BananaPancakes.
This does explain the way so many people feel, myself included.
It was sad to read, because it really puts it out there about how these sort of things always happen.
It was beautiful xoxo

I seriously can't begin to tell you how much I loved this. It was only 100 words and yet you managed to express exactly how so many people feel.

I wish I could be free. I can relate to this in so many ways. Countless times do I wish I could just be a bird and fly away somewhere else without a care in the world.

I'm sorry that I can't properly to tell you how amazing I found this. It is simply beautiful.
<3

Awe, this is sweet
& I really love the title of it, it's what made me click on it
(:

D'AW!

I really like your metaphor here.

This was rather interesting. Kinda seemed like a stream of thought almost. My favorite line was the one about the wings. It's already been posted above, but just because it was a rather stunning sentence. And your layout was great. I pretty much suck at layouts, so I commend you for having a good one, though it has nothing to do with the actual story.

This was beautiful love (:
I loved it. It was beautiful and smooth.
I'm surprised it's your first one. It's amazing.
The layout is gorgeous.
and the banner is beautiful.
You did a wonderful job.<3

Don't we all..
I like the concept of this story.
This was a very well written first drabble. :)

That was beautiful, it could be a poem, but I porbably thought when I read the first two lines.But when I got to the end and it said "I wish I was a bird" that's when I knew it was a human talking. I like that, it got me thinking for a while. Write another one!

I always fall. It’s inevitable the way my wings will only carry me so far. So far until I plummet back to earth shattering my bones and my dreams.

I don't know why, but I love it.

I agree with all the above mibbians. This was lovely. (:

I agree with silk tea. The repetition adds to the story. It reminded me of the Alice in Wonderland movie where Alice looks up at the sky and sees a bird and then the guy gets angry with her because she messed up the dance and she says, "I was wondering what it would be like to fly." And he says "Why would you waste your time thinking about something so silly?" That's my favorite part of the movie and your story reminds me of it so of course I love it!

I disagree with you Redundance, I feel that the repetition of words actually fit nicely with this story.
I'm not sure if it was the plot, or just the feel of it
Or what, but it was really nice.

I like this, and I get what you are trying to say, but I think it gets a little repetitive sometimes. Like you should use different words. Otherwise, I think it is really well written.

<3
Lauren

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