This might be a mess (because I commented as I read), and you'll have to deal with it.
First off Krystina, that first paragraph blew me away. I remember first reading your work and you’ve come a long way with this. I’m so proud. :’) This whole story just blew my socks. You've gotten so good with the detail and explaining and all that fancy stuff. Truly, that was awesome.
but he knew his family would have a cow Krystina did I ever tell you how much I love you. "have a cow" Mind blown.
hoping that laser beams would shoot out of his eyes like in Superman and make him disappear Um, Krystina… I’m pretty sure they didn’t have superman back then, or laser beams, but God, this made me laugh.
she was able to snatch a ticket for this ship was because she was playing poker with a group of people on the streets HOLY SHIZZ, practically Titanic right thur, except the other way. And this was also very much Titanic too: Him and Anna got on top of a table and started dancing crazily.
And my last thing I want to add is this: Because every moment spent with you is not a wasted one. That made me shed a tear on the inside. It was just said so well. It makes me wanna cry. *tear* took my soul.
First off Krystina, that first paragraph blew me away. I remember first reading your work and you’ve come a long way with this. I’m so proud. :’)
This whole story just blew my socks. You've gotten so good with the detail and explaining and all that fancy stuff. Truly, that was awesome.
but he knew his family would have a cow
Krystina did I ever tell you how much I love you. "have a cow" Mind blown.
hoping that laser beams would shoot out of his eyes like in Superman and make him disappear
Um, Krystina… I’m pretty sure they didn’t have superman back then, or laser beams, but God, this made me laugh.
she was able to snatch a ticket for this ship was because she was playing poker with a group of people on the streets
HOLY SHIZZ, practically Titanic right thur, except the other way.
And this was also very much Titanic too: Him and Anna got on top of a table and started dancing crazily.
And my last thing I want to add is this:
Because every moment spent with you is not a wasted one.
That made me shed a tear on the inside. It was just said so well. It makes me wanna cry. *tear*
took my soul.
&& Good luck.