Insanity - Comments

Oh my goodness! This is amazing! Wow I'm speechless but feel the need to write a comment. I've never read any of your writing like this but DAMN GIRL THIS IS AWESOME!

Heather, I fucking love it! It's amazing!
Poor Zack being so delusional!

Holy damn! That was amazing. Wow. I loved it! Poor Zacky...he is criminally insane. :[

~Wow, that was incredible.
Just really well-written and I love how you narrated everything in great detail. Well, Zack narrated it, but you know what I mean lol. Really good, this entry better win the contest!!! :D
For a second, once the cops and Brian showed up, I thought someone would end up dying or gettign seriously injured. hahaha.
.... about the end, the nurse seemed to resemble Heather so I feel Zack could initiate another possible fatal attraction haha. Ahhh, wish this could be continued. LOVED it! Makes me want to write a one-shot now out of the blue lmaooo.
I loved his denial, by the way.
:)

This was amazing, as your work usually is.
Zacky actually passed as insane. The way he was in denial about it and everything was perfect.
Great work as always! ;D

Wowzers, why does this not have any comments? That kind of infuriates me! :P
It was so good! The part at the beginning really threw me for a loop when Zacky looked at Heather's engagement ring and it was revealed that she was Brian's fiancée. That alone lets you know how delusional the guy is because the way he described her was like they were dating and not just having an affair.
Zacky was seriously creepy in the sense that he had fooled himself completely. I felt awful for Heather when he showed up and eventually she figured out that he was kidnapping her. It must have been mortifying for her, especially when Zacky kept asking her to do regular things that a couple would do. By then he was pretty deep into his mental illness.
And I loved the end! I was surprised Zacky was careless by letting her go for a walk, and I adored how he still believed that Heather had come willingly with him to the cabin, even though it was untrue. At the end, I just started to sing 'Almost Easy', but that's because it reminded me of it. xD
I was actually hoping for another chapter because it was that good! ;) <3