Alienated - Comments

wow, no, no, no, :'''c this can't be happening... OMG Mikey is such a monster, I don't believe a word Gerard says and it's so fucking terrible and OMFG it's killing me, really. just. no. *facekeyboard 7yu66* *facedesk* *facepalms* you're devastating my life, I love it

Ahh so good, but so heartbreaking ;___; Yes mibba does have quite a lot of techinal difficulties.. Personally I like AO3 better

Oh FUCK. It seemed like Frank had at least gotten out of something more or less okay...then his bad luck had to come back all together with him locking himself in the bed and then Mikey coming to tell him he found out that he kissed Gerard. D:

Oh Gerard! What have you done?

Whoa, I was actually kinda prejudiced to this story... Idk, I don't like science fiction much C: I thought it'd be like... That it'd have some beginning, you know, like it'd begin with Gerard arriving on Earth, them meeting and so, but you managed to surprise me greatly C: I loved the way the reader was thrown in the middle of Frank's life without a warning, without an explanation why Gerard was leaving, for the... Like, 5 first chapters I had no clue what's happening; but somehow it managed to keep me hooked C: it was great actually C: I was glad to see that Gerard has feelings and is willing to help, though it isn't the kind of help Frank would want :/ but it keeps him alive, to the moment someone discovers the kiss (hopefully it won't happen C: ) what I absolutely hate is this planet Gerard's from, it's like the worst place to live in the whole universe, or at least it feels like it to me :/ anyway, it was so shocking to find that Gerard invented that (well, seems like it's cruel) method of training, Frank must feel so betrayed now after all those things and broken promises... But he annoys me sometimes, though I love the way he keeps fighting for Gerard... It's so sad :'c but I didn't cry, but maybe it's because I read it either at school or in public so it'd be extremely weird :D

Yay update! Jeez, Gerard, of course Frank is not content, can't be. the situation is just a little better than nothing, that's all. And being a house slave for that other guy would be Frank's safest option...but that's not what Frank's looking for exactly. He doesn't want safeness, he wants Gerard!

And talking about Gerard uh...curious about that problem or whatever. O___O

Dear lord, i absolutely love this. The entire concept is intriguing and interesting and I love the characterizations and just everything. This story is perfect and I cant wait to see what happens.

ahhh you updated!! :D I love this story, and the chapter was awesome, but sad :'( I can't wait for the next update ^__^

Oh my god, an update! :D I love this story so much. I think he should have told Gerard about the kiss, it might have been a good idea. That way if they were going to get tested Gerard could make some precautions. But I guess I can see why he didn't, especially after Gerard told him it wouldn't be safe, he wouldn't want Gerard to be mad at him.

I agree with Frank's decision to not tell Gerard that he kissed him yet. That way he can at least enjoy the time they have together until getting to Gerard's planet, even without kisses. Well, actually, I'm not sure I'd ever tell him. Frank's initial idea did make sense, but what if Gerard's reaction is NOT just being "oh well, since we¡re already in danger, just keep on kissing"? Frank could end up with nothing, being away from Gerard

If he doesn't tell him, here's a possibility that no one will find out for a long time -if ever. If they did well...bad luck, things are fucked as they are anyway.

I can't decide what's the best option: probably having more time together but with no kissing...or risking telling Gerard hoping for the complete package but maybe being sent to someone else instead...

I wouldn't like to be in Frank's place, that for sure!

This is an infuriatingly excellent story! It makes me so emotional. You know, If I were Frank I would've kissed Gerard too. I mean seriously? Fuck Mikey and the rest of the aliens (Except Gee) They already kidnapped him and currently took away his chance of being able to love Gerard and get married to him. I agree completely with Frank's decision, Gerard would never let him kiss him again while conscious so I would do the exact same, kiss him while he's unconscious. Mikey pisses me off but for some reason I get the feeling that he will turn and help his brother and Frank. but for the time being I hate his fucking guts, also I'm completely pissed with Gerard, I get it that he just wants to keep Frank safe but I think he should allow kissing. I mean, if Frank isn't concerned with living or not, he should at least make Frank happy for the time being. :)

Yaaaay you updated!! :D love it. I think Frank made the right decision, even though it might get him killed :/ update again soon, this story rules! <3

Franks gonna pay for that, but it was cute <3

holy shit O.o poor frank! i think that it was sort stupid of him, but yknow he deserves love and him and Gerard should just be together! ughhhhh! can't wait for the next update! :3

He is an idiot for not listening, but at the same time, its cool he follows his heart. :D to him, that love is worth it.
Awesome fic, please update again soon. This short update will NOT hold me over long hun

Oh my, their advanced technology fucks with everything! Like, every thing Frank thinks they could get away with because no one should know...Gerard has a technology-related answer. Dammit. Even kissing is such a problem! At first, I didn't get what Frank was thinking with "if his DNA was already on my lips, then there would be no argument". I was "No, but if they found out, one time would be enough and it would be over!". Then when I saw he meant that Gerard would have no argument (cause once is enough so once or 73878976 is the same) it made complete sense. He's right. I mean, yes, he risked his life by kissing Gerard, but what else can he do? No option is good at this point and he's desperate. Even if they find out eventually, he sees this as a chance to enjoy Gerard for a while. I'm afraid Gerard won't be happy at all when Frank tells him, though. :P

This. Is. So. Awesome. Seriously, one of the best stories ever! Can't wait to see what happens!

I am so happy you updated yay! Gaah Gerard is being such an ASSHOLE

long time no see! :D

feel so bad for frnk -__- and omg the planet O_O i would like shit my pants if i was frank O_O

update sooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Gah. Poor Frank. All options, even if better than dying or even better than being any random alien's slave, are still sad as fuck. I mean, he'd still be in another planet, away from everything and everyone he knows...except for Gerard, but he wouldn't be able to be with him like he'd want to. And when you think about it, maybe seeing Gerard all the time without being able to be with him is even worse than not seeing him. But, well, Frank evidently can't stand the idea of not even seeing him.All the time, all I think is: "of fuck you, Gerard, grow a pair and get the fuck away with Frank!" Can't they get on a little ship and get the fuck off or something? Would they be found no matter where they go and what they do? Or even...isn't there a way to send Frank home? Although...at this point not sure he'd accept that. :/ And Mikey's evil, I agree with Frank no matter what Gerard says. Evil!

And that planet sounds like big-ass teeth galore. O_O