What Could Have Been - Comments

june1998 (100)

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omg i love it .... its amazing update soon please!!!!<333

July 6th, 2011 at 05:06am

EuphoricGoddess (100)

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Ohhhhh.Emmm.Geeeee !
HE KISSED HER ! ....., SHE KISSED BACK !!!!!!
Ohhhhh.Emmmmm.Geeeeee !!!
will Justin find out?? , will he get maddd [ENOUGH TO LIKEE BEAT UP RYAN!...he's the one who kissed her FIRST!]* , Justin &+ Maddie are too cute to break up over ryan -.- !

February 8th, 2011 at 06:05am

Life'sLemonade (100)

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oh god i cant believe they kissed! i honestly hope justin doesnt find out. update soon please.

February 7th, 2011 at 08:05am

lemongumdrops (100)

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I don't even know what to say except OMFG!!!! They kissed. THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!! NOOO!!! GAH! Loved the chapter though :D

January 6th, 2011 at 05:04pm

WishingOnTheOne (100)

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Oh my God. I seriously hate Ryan right now D: but Justin and Maddie are soo cute....<3
update soon?
btw i love your story idea, definitely different from the other JB fanfictions!

December 26th, 2010 at 07:48pm

remember-that-summer (105)

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I loved it! (:
update soon?

December 17th, 2010 at 12:35am

colorado dreams. (100)

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Ryan makes me sick.
I can tell he has something up his sleve.
But Maddie and Justin are so cute hahah.

December 16th, 2010 at 10:32pm

lemongumdrops (100)

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WTF! The whole Ryan winking threw me off! What a freaking jerk.

December 16th, 2010 at 06:11pm

colorado dreams. (100)

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CHAZ YOU ARE A COCK BLOCKING MOFO.
But chaz is cute so I can't hurt him.
They are so cute together!
But I don't think Ryan and Justin are going to get along well.....
:O

December 13th, 2010 at 11:00pm

lemongumdrops (100)

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I can relate to this story in ways, I really love it :D People who plagerize are suck ass little bitches. Just saying. I hope you still continue to write, I'm addicted and if you stopped, well I would be in serious trouble.

December 8th, 2010 at 08:14am

LoveToWriteJB (100)

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another great chapter, as usual :) Your writing just really flows, and its just easy to read. I like that.
I like how you never do the whole "sorry, this is a bad chapter, the next one will be better" thing. So many people never update and make excuses, but you always keep it coming.
I really like how I'm genuinely not sure where you're going to take this. Like, I have ideas but you're really unpredictable.
I'm hoping this IS a Maddie/Justin story and not Maddie/Ryan... but I think I'll love it whatever you do.
Much love xx

December 8th, 2010 at 07:17am

remember-that-summer (105)

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I seriously wanted to yell at ryan haha(: I live this!
Update soon?

December 8th, 2010 at 02:33am

ALLTiMEJULES! (100)

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LOVE IT!!!!! I am like legit sitting in a corner reading your story at softball and I am like screaming at my phone, people were giving me some weird looks lol :)

December 8th, 2010 at 01:01am

DropdeadBeautiful (100)

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But...but...but...
Nuuuuuuuuu.
You can't just..
Nuuuu.
Don't leave us hanging with that and like, not updateeeeeeeee.
That would make my heart saddddddd. :(((

December 4th, 2010 at 05:07am

Aye_Its_Kyra (100)

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I Love THis Story.
You. SHould. Update. Now.
KThanks.
Love;
Kyra. xD

December 2nd, 2010 at 08:18pm

ALLTiMEJULES! (100)

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I love it so freaking much!!! Update soon please!

November 30th, 2010 at 05:58pm

Morgansaurus.' (100)

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Oh my giddy giddy, that was so good!
Aww they are so adorable and understanding <3

November 30th, 2010 at 01:04pm

annnna (100)

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Aaww, Justin was soooo sweet! I'm so glad he forgave her!

November 30th, 2010 at 09:12am

lemongumdrops (100)

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For a minute I totally expected the voice to be Ryan. I was thinking, "If he says anything to upset her anymore I'm gonna kill him!" Then I had to remind myself this is fiction and it's for entertainment purposes only haha. I'm really loving this. I think this and I Owe You are my two faves out of your stories so far! Lovely work darling.

November 30th, 2010 at 06:47am

ellaax (100)

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i realllly like your story, it's taking such a different direction to the usual cliche justin bieber fanfiction. really excited to be reading more :)

November 30th, 2010 at 04:39am