I really really like this! And the previous commenter is definitely right, people haven't realized how truly great this story is! It has so much potential! And your writing is spot-on! I'd really love to read more! [and I'm happy Gerard is going to be in this! (because I'm obsessed) and that Bert's a sleaze-bag! (because I'm not a fan) :D]
And the previous commenter is definitely right, people haven't realized how truly great this story is!
It has so much potential!
And your writing is spot-on!
I'd really love to read more!
[and I'm happy Gerard is going to be in this! (because I'm obsessed) and that Bert's a sleaze-bag! (because I'm not a fan) :D]