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  • Olivia Colby

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    I had a few imaginary friends. This story is short, sweet and touching. You made it happen in 103 words, even! And it's a very inspirational piece.
    December 9th, 2010 at 04:11pm
  • outtahereyall

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    Lovely layout; I love the concept of an imaginary friend, for they're not really mentioned on Mibba, so it's nice and unique and something that is probably in a league of it's own on here. I like the kidfic of it, as many can't write children well simply since we're teenagers and our childhood is a bit behind us, but you pulled it off well. Great job, Gigi!
    December 7th, 2010 at 01:12am
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    First of all, I love the layout. It went so well with the picture. And speaking of the picture, it was really adorable (: Second, this drabble was so endearing and charming. Like Little said, I thought this was going to be about a friend who passed away, but the ending caught me by completely surprise. I loved this so, so much. However, it tears me up a little bit 'cause reading this brings back my memories of my imaginary friend.
    This was lovely (:
    December 6th, 2010 at 05:17am
  • Little

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    This was a very sweet and charming story. I first thought that this story was about a friend that had passed away. The ending caught me by surprise. I loved it, I think everyone has had an imaginary friend at some point in their childhood.
    December 6th, 2010 at 04:03am
  • college dropout

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    hello there :D

    so I'm taking up your advice and reading some of your one-shots. I really like this one. It's simple and straight to the point, but very adorable and relatable.

    Nice job, and I'll try to check out some more of your writing when I have the chance.
    December 5th, 2010 at 09:09pm
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    This is a very endearing drabble. At first, I was certain this would be about a friend of yours that passed away. Or even a mute friend, seeing that she always replied with silence. I never saw the ending coming, it was slightly shocking. But it made sense. The dialog is the beginning is my favorite. It tears me up a little in the inside.
    December 3rd, 2010 at 07:50pm
  • hiyaitsjackie

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    awe that was so cute, i think every kid had an imaginary friend at one point or another. good job!
    September 3rd, 2010 at 06:48am