Doesn't Take a Genius - Comments

Good update, please update soon!

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I love the realistic vibe this story gives me. I can tell that you know a lot about mystery-style novels, and like the person below me, I've never really read/watched any Criminal Minds stories/episodes before, although I truly believe this one really is book-publishing worthy (trust me, I've read quite some good mystery novels).

It felt like I was there, and the tension and emotions in the story was easily felt through reading this. I have only one constructive criticism, and that is about how it's a bit hard to read this, and I'm pretty sure changing that, if you want, is very doable, so there's not much problem there. Very well-written and realistic story. I'd give this five stars!

I've just realised the bunching up of the dialogue is because I write out my stories on microsoft and on there its normal but when I copy and paste it on to here it collides together :(

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you like it and I'm trying my best to update, had a lot on recently, but writing as much as I can of Chapter four so hopefully have it up tonight or tomorrow :)

I was brought here by the new comment swap feature. ^_^. I've never really read any Criminal Minds stories, even though I really love with show, and Mr. Reid. So, I was happy when I saw this story was chosen.

I'm pretty intrigued by what you have so far. I'm enjoying how you're laying out the relationship between Spencer and Ophelia. And the story line is very interesting.

I have a few tips, though, as the commenter below me also said. You should space out the paragraphs more, especially when it comes to dialogue. It's somewhat hard to read as it is now, all bunched together. I think you'll find it a lot easier to write, also, if you do that. Of course, it's whatever you prefer. I just thought I'd give you some advice. :)

Anyway, I'm definitely going to subscribe! I can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon, please!

Okay, I'm hooked.
Matthew Grey Gublar is FUCKING AMAZING!
I'd.. do very naughty things to him..
Anyways, great storyline. Love it!
A few tips though, when you're writing the dialogue, don't bunch it up together. It makes it very hard to read.

Example:

"Those are my polka-dotted sleep pants," she giggled.

"Very cute," he replied.

See, it's MUCH easier to read.

Also, make sure you use punctuation and in the right places.

Please don't think I'm being mean, I'm just trying to help a fellow writer out. Loooove the story though, honestly I do! So please! Continue :)

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Finally, another person who likes Reid!!!

update?? :)

I like this so far (Reid is my favorite Criminal Minds character). I'm going to subscribe. :)

Hehe, thanks guys. I'm writing part 2 as we speak! Hope to get it up either tonight or tomorrow, thanks for reading and feedback x

i love this so far.
:D
update soon

I found another person who like Reid! I find him amazing... I'll keep reading this I thinks =3