Ripped Chords and Retired Skin - Comments

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Your dribbles are loooong woman.

But any who, I don't know who James Morrison is either, but he totally sounds familiar. The title is beautiful, as is the descriptive language you use here. I really need to read more of your works because it's truly amazing. You're just...yes, perfection.

I'm not familiar with James Morrison but I loved the way you wrote it, I thought it was incredible the way you wrote it, the descriptions especially. I'm also in agreement with Teenage Dirtbag/ I'm extremely glad that you made it a sad ending, I thought it was beautiful and even though it was a sad ending, it was wonderful

Okay, I just had to read this because I adore James Morrison and I haven't read any stories about him before. I cannot express how much I loved it. The way you use language and descriptions is so fresh and brilliant. I especially loved the wiping his mouth of residue and sad song lyrics part. You took a relatively simple storyline that people have used before but you truly made it your own. And I really like that you didn't have a happy ending (because I'm a sucker for sad endings).

GAH, this comment is totally not getting across how much I loved/adored/enjoyed it. xD Just...fantastic job. I've read a lot of your other pieces and I really think that this might be your best yet.