Hot Nights & Moonlights. - Comments

Sorry for the two comments, I press the wrong button and it posted it >_< Im sorry.
Noo this can't be the end :/
I still dont know!!!!
Please make a squeal, I really like this story :)

Nooo this can't be the end :/
I still don't know!

That was really good! Please make a sequel. I think I just figured out how the characters are. But I' m pobably wrong anyways, hahaha

Well I think I know who both charachters are now! :D
Anyways nice ending to the story, it's nice that we can imagine/chose ourselves how their meeting woud've went. If you decide to make a sequal, I would read it but the choice is up to you.
All I can say is I enjoyed this story very much and you seriously deserve more comments! :)

^ Don't worry HelenaxFantasy I have no clue either xD
Again a great update! In my opinion the chapter wasn't confusing at all.
Be using the italics you could see clearing wich parts were real life and which were fantasy.
But it was best that you also put three stars in front of the italics because in some fonts you can't see italics very well =) I still don't know who the characters are, but I'll send you a message with what I think so far.

Wow..that was hot I will say haha.
Still don't know how the characters are, like I said I'll be the only one who doesn't know -_-
Update soon :)

Again amazing :).
And I still don't know how the characters are :/ Maybe chapter 3 will help me out XD

I'm starting to like your writing more and more. It was a really nice update!
I really placed myself in the situation of one of the characters. I even feel in love right now with the butterflies and everything xD You just describe it all so well and it's really realistic! For example not knowing what to say, even if you want to say something so bad. To be honest I still don't have a clue who the characters are. Maybe chapter three will help me out ;)

The first chapter turned out really good. I've got an idea of who one might be, but I'm most likely wrong. I'll wait till you have chapter two before I try and guess who they are.

Wow..that was really good.
You did a great on describing the characters. I know it's hard to described characters without giving the name, so you did really good on that. I have no idea who the characters are, I'll wait until next update to try to guess.

First comment! =)
I just have to say I love the whole concept behind this story: guessing the characters.
I've never seen a story like this on here. So far it's really good. You didn't use any names but you know perfectelly what's going on. You also decribed the characters really well. The story really made me curious but I'm going to wait until chapter 2 before I'll start guessing.
I guess I will now unpatiently wait for your next chapter xD