All I Know Is To Keep Walking Round The Bend - Comments

Overall, it's written really good!
I didn't find any errors and your use of vocabulary is stellar. :)
Everything's detailed with just the right amount.
Definitely keep it up!

i love the line, its the air i breath *sways and swoons onto the floor* so romantic!!!! amy this is brill i'll definitely be keeping an eye on it and i love the story line (that so far has been revealed)

Why oh why oh why oh why do no guys ever use the line "it's the air that I breathe?" That's just *melts*

Hey, guess what? *whispers* I have much love for this story.

WRITE SOME MORE =D
Love xx

Eeep! Goosebumps! Now, if only there were actually guys like Johnny that actually existed!
And I apologise for not subscribing, I forgot! I'll do that now (:

Ooh I quite like it so far. Welcome back to Mibba! It's very interesting. Sadly, this isn't my type of story but it's still good nevertheless. ^^

YUM! Johnny just makes me think of Depp =']
MORE!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY FRIEND BACK ON MIBBA =D
Babycakes, I like this quite a much...
Write more, pleaseeeeeeee?
Love youuu xxxxx

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