July 7th, 2012 at 04:15pm
I liked writing this.
I liked reading this.
It reminded me very much of Asimov's work.
I am a robot, built on the whim of a completely human thought, and I am flawed in a completely inhuman way.
This was my favorite line. I really like the emotions expressed in this. And the idea of it was very interesting. I think this would make for an interesting story, not just a drabble, because I'm interested in learning about more about what's going on.
The last line especially was very special - " I can't cry about it" - it is very interesting and powerful.
Also, what a new and original concept for a story. Really interesting take on the word cry, you really took it and didn't just go for the obvious idea. I really enjoyed reading this.