Wonders and Wonderland - Comments

Wow, just great. I loved it from beginning till end.
I also like the thread part, how it saves them both.
I also enjoyed the chasing the rabbit part :)
Very beautifully written and I like how you continue with the nice simple background.

wow. I can't even comprehend this right now, it's beautifully written, I love the part when the thread saves both of them but who is the narrator in the story? The imagery was great and so was the emotion, great job XD

I only read the first few paragraphs but I'll be back to read more, I promise! I like it so far the summary really drew me in I love alice in wonderland spinoffs! XD I'll comment again when i read the whole thing