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I really love this! Oliver and Keegan have a realistic and interesting chemistry (also it's adorable how Oliver's nickname seems to be Peaches), and I love Oliver's narration. Her wanderlust and eagerness to get out of her town is very relatable, and your writing style is clear and easy-to-read while still being beautiful. The pacing is great and your grammar is perfect. I really do want to know more about Keegan, though - he's quite mysterious

I'm addicted?

THEY ARE SO CUTE :3

It's a nice and warm story. Sweet, even. With all that swagger of Keegan, and Ollie's naiveté (and childishness), the story becomes romantic. The plot is awesome, and so are the fictitious places. Keep it up, 'cause I admire your determination in writing, even though you have such a hectic schedule on your planner. :) Have fun! I definitely <3 your story! :)

Keegan** wow typing fail

Kega, you are pretty amazing :D

This is really nice so far. It seems pretty good so far, and I'll subscribe because hey, what are friends for man? Plus I like this. I have always liked your writing so I'm excited to see you put it into action even though you have a busy schedule :)

Hey! Okay so here's my stuff to say! I LOVE TEH LAYOUT! it's so pretty but you can change the width of the layout to suit your picture so you know. It's in the first story sectoin, usually it says 600 and then px. And also I love the title, amazing, but maybe a prettier picture? so it brings people into the story. I can make you a kick aword banner if you'd like :D but other than that I'm so excited for this story! Because it's my idea and I don't have to use it anymore! ;D hahaha! Loveya loverly