I really love this! Oliver and Keegan have a realistic and interesting chemistry (also it's adorable how Oliver's nickname seems to be Peaches), and I love Oliver's narration. Her wanderlust and eagerness to get out of her town is very relatable, and your writing style is clear and easy-to-read while still being beautiful. The pacing is great and your grammar is perfect. I really do want to know more about Keegan, though - he's quite mysterious
August 11th, 2014 at 05:27pm