Babylon the Great - Comments

Loved it.

more when you can please

I really liked this chapter. It was full of a lot of emotion.
Great story so far! :D Update soon! :D

i am glad you were not so mean and make us wait until december and i hope that you will be extremely nice and update a lot more often this is such a great story and so different then any other story out there that i hate to have to wait so long for updates. please please please update more often i really crave more of this story.

i love it so much

Loved it
: D

I wonder how Ari will react to when she arrives to Bat Country. I can't wait for the next one :)

Zack definitely makes me smile :) And he is very down to earth, so I could see him being that way as a god as well.
Anywhoo, I was so excited to see that this story was updated! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I LOVE this and I absolutely cannot wait to read more!
=D

My god, you are amazing. There are not enough words to describe your mad ninja skills and your amazing work on all of your updates. XD

this rules!
*subscribes*

this is so bad ass lol

first, i love how you are using the a7x song names
for things and places definitly a unique idea =)

second, Brian and Callie are either going to kill each other of bang each othe sensless lol

third, i wonder if Brian is telling the truth...

fourth, ZV is such a sexy beast lol =)

and last but not least...i love this story! =)

Awsomenes....I wonder if something bad was going for them...orrrrr??? I guess we shall see XD I can't wait to read more!

Off to Bat Country! Can't wait til they get there!

Oops I have no idea why that posted twice...sorry...>.<

Back again. I really have no words, except that I think you're going to make my Shads very jealous...I'm falling for Syn...

That's an accomplishment for anyone ;).

The masturbation at the start was a nice shock, though. I feel for Callie, I really do.

Back again. I really have no words, except that I think you're going to make my Shads very jealous...I'm falling for Syn...

That's an accomplishment for anyone ;).

The masturbation at the start was a nice shock, though. I feel for Callie, I really do.

And, so I stopped by to have a peek at one of your fics...and now I'm fighting to pick my jaw up off the floor. This is just...beyond words. I LOVE the premise. A7X as gods! Awesome.

I use that word way too much....

I love the kid, Ariadne? I love the name, it's a different, but not too different. The perfect name for a demigod.

And, The Rev...the way you described him, his movements, his appearance... Just amazing.

I feel like you deserver better words than this...but, I don't think I can manage.

Oh, by the way, I noticed one typo. You put 'luck' instead of 'lucky' when you wrote You are a very luck woman, Callie

On to chapter two. [I love how you're using the Greek alphabet for the chapter titles].

I really like this story :)
If you don't mind me asking what inspired you to write a story like this?

Yay! Early chapter!!! This story is awesome, I love the idea. Wonder if she'll forgive Brian any time soon? Well, I suppose not...wouldn't be much of a story if she did, although, maybe this 'you're in grave danger' thing will start any drama?? (:D I like guessing... :)