I can't get over how awesome the layout is for this story. How did you do that? I've trying to do that sort of stuff for a while now, but I can't figure it out.
You story is pretty decent. Though, I have to say re-reading the book does get kind of ehh. Exspecially when it's Harry this, Freya this, Harry this. I mean that Harry runs to his god father, she runs to her mother. The fight comes, then they both fall into the portal??? Though it does have a more original flare when you add Erebus. I'm not trying to be mean, I just mean that personally I'm done reading this, because re-reading the story with a blip thrown in is not working for me.
When it said that Astra had handed Freya her thongs, I re-read that sentence like 5 times. Then I went to an online dictionary to see if it was Australian slang. hehe.
You should have had Melissa and Freya start booing when Dumbledore said Cedric's name. Would've been funny!
completely made my day. :D plus, i looooove this series.