Inside A Killer's Mind - Comments

sorry i had recently watched a horror film where he did that and it was playing through my mind :O but thank you for the tip! =)

Narcissistic serial killer, at first I thought he had a type of OCD, then I found out where he kept the bodies. The stories good overall, the entire god like complex fit perfectly with this character, I can tell he's smart by the way he categorizes his victims, which leads to the thought of obvious obsession, the only part that bothered me was the bodies in the basement. From the impression that I got he seemed to have killed multiple victims and placed them in the basement on the 'pile'. The 'pile' of bodies gives off a really bad stench and anyone who entered the house would be suspicious. Not only that, but the fact that he uses the same trick over and over again, from the same area, or city I presume, then it would only be a matter of time before he was caught. But that's just me thinking too much. ^W^ Great job!

thank you so much! =)

First of, did you make the layout yourself? If so, you can change the font colour by going to your Layout section on your My Mibba, clicking on the edit button next to it, and using the drop-down list you used to make it =] I think it’s Font Colour under the Story Content heading, or something similar. If you didn’t make it yourself, then I guess you can disregard this. xD

Anyway, moving onto the story. I really, really enjoyed this. I love reading about stalkers, serial killers, all creepy stuff like that, and this did not disappoint. What I loved most of all was his intelligence, the way he defined a soul from a life. That was awesome, and I really enjoyed that part. I also really loved his delusions of grandeur, the way he referred to himself as a god and saw himself as superior to his victims. That’s so accurate when you think about past serial killers who have had some sort of God complex going on.

I’ll definitely be coming back to read this again. It’s absolutely thrilling, a brilliant job! Well done!

sorry guys dont know how to change the font colour so you'll have to highlight it to read it properly