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  • catchingkisses_

    catchingkisses_ (100)

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    I like it.
    I suck with the whole criticism thing.
    Agreeing with the above comment though.
    September 1st, 2010 at 10:51pm
  • The Color Abi

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    Wow.
    It's very captivating but I feel that it's too rushed.
    It followed well in places but in others, it seemed forced...

    It's a great first draft though Cute
    September 1st, 2010 at 10:19pm
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