Downhearted for just a flutter of the lashes - Comments

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I decided to read this after I'd decided, from your profile (indeed, shallow), that you were awesome.
And holy shit. This is really really good. I am absolutely and completely blown away by this! You're definitely the type of writer that makes me insanely jealous. Seriously, you're a great wordsmith.

I'm glad I read this actually, it's very inspiring. I think the chapters need to be longer, though. But overall the story has a sad setting to it, it's like you can feel she's depressed and leaves a thought in your mind on what could've happened that made her this way? It's amazing. :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I don't have a complaint. Good job.

Very good descriptive sentances. The story has a nice flowing mood to it even though it is somewhat kind of sad. But overall, very nicely done :)