She's Got the Looks That Kill - Comments

Hey i just finished reading all ur chapters of this story, and i like!! i like very much! and i'm really surprised that u don't have anymore comments than this, it's a motley crue stroy for crying out loud! i really like how descriptive u are, but still not too detailed to be boring, u know those kinds of stroies in which nothing seems to happen cuz the writer is too redundant! that's why i like ur story! it's upbeat! plus i'm kind of a sucker for reading abt drugs and shit, wasted youth and all that :)
but anyway just wanted to say that i really enjoy ur writing and that i'll be looking forward for the next chapters :)

just one thing though which i found a bit confusing at times... like if the chapter was stated to be writen with no point of view (2nd person i think it is) it would sometimes change to be in first person... but other than that i really like it!

anyway gonna wrap it up now, just thought i should give u a long comment since u like "social interaction" :)

btw i subscribed to the story too! so i'll be following ;)

I think it's despicable that you don't have more comments than this. I love Motley Crue and I love this story, and though it's been a long time since someone commented I hope you'll continue for my sake at least :). The only grammatical mistake I noticed was some run-on sentences, but other than that it was great. Please, please continue. I love it!

Will do Aero. Will do.

I love it so far. It's really descriptive and...I don't even know. It's just fucking awesome.
Gotta continue. Pronto.