Yeah...all the non-clearwater wolves are jackasses and have temporarily ruined my appetite for the story. Can't at least one of them have stood up for Seth? Honestly...
i hate that tyra character, but i love how you made leah imprint on someone. i think seth and eli make a good couple. and if she came back to la push, and she had to stay in the forest becuase she couldn't go to seth, why didn't she go to forks to her family? did they even know she was back?
Well! This is certainly interesting. What's the big deal with Tyra? Why the hell does she know so much? Someone bitchslap her already.
AND! TELL ME: why the heck did Eliza camp out in the La Push forest instead of going to the Cullens?! I mean hellO, her brother's there and they have nice warm comfy beds. Seriously.
Love Leah, Love Seth, Love Jane, Hope Dante won't get killed or tortured for using her powers on Aro, and...yeah. Alex is cool too.
Just some friendly criticism... When you write, make sure to press the enter button twice to make paragraphs. and space out the conversations like this:
"Hello," she said with a smile.
Looking back at her I grinned and greeted her fairly.
Make sense? Just telling you so the more crazy grammer lunatics don't report you. I know from experience. D:
But other than that... edit the chapters and keep up the writing (: <3