Vajayjay and hoo ha just ruin it. :l and it's called smut. The sex scene is called smut. And...I'm not saying it. Jeez. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU USE VAJAYJAY AND HOO HA. JESUS. ITS CALLED A VAGINA, A PUSSY, A CUNT, ANYTHING BUT A VAJAYJAY.
i like it...on the quotes i was confused at who was talking but since the situation was about throwing ideas out randomly it fit...i think it has lots of potential and would like to see an update soon (: