I Know Exactly - Comments

It's so clever and graceful and I love how you went about executing the premise. It's very heartfelt and I like how the two characters admire each other up close instead of from a far because you get better details and descriptions. And how you didn't have names for either of them made the mood of the story more ~loose because the readers know that there's only 'the boy' and ''the girl'. No dialogue almost, emphasized the story a bit, no one said anything and it was just lovely thoughts and amity and it was such a nice read. I really liked it.

I adore how elegant and subtle this is. Really, you've turned a simple scene of a boy and a girl, sitting on a park bench just feeling the wind, into a beautiful piece of art. <3

I love the vagueness of just referring to them as 'the boy' and 'the girl'. It gives the story a sort of graceful and poetic beauty. It's sweet really, how much the boy and girl care for each other. I felt like I was spying on them, like I was looking in on a moment that was completely lovely and private.

Side-by-side on the little bench in the sun through the red leaves, they wait for another wind and wonder if they dare identify perfection. I'm smitten with this last line, it's really beautiful, and the perfect way to end this.

This was beautifully written, you have such a wonderful way with words.
They painted a picture across my mind, and I doubt I'll ever forget it for months to come.
This leaves a big impact, and it was just done perfectly.

Please, do. <3