Nightmare - Comments

Well I have finally finished this story, and just wow!!! After the last chapter I could just rip zacky's throat out with my bare hands...grrr!!! What an ass,how could he do that!! And now I'm going to go and read the sequel!!!!

I just have to say that I'm only halfway through this story and I love everything about it!! I should be getting ready for work but I just get sucked in..lol I'm already subscribed to the sequel of this story so I need to finish this one and move on to the next. I'm really a big fan of the whole vampires and underworld storylines for some reason. Don't get me wrong I love the normal stories too, but vampires are my favorite!! And I'm kind of happy because I actually knew what a necromancer is I didn't have to go and look it up so I felt a little bit smart lol. So keep up the good writing and now I really do have to go get ready for work or I will be late, but hopefully I can finish this story later once I get to work...:0) The chapter I'm on now I love how jimmy was introduced I was wondering where he was as I was reading previous chapters. :0)

haha i sooo saw it coming that the spirit was Jimmy! but i really like the way you drew it out in the story in a suspensful way. it was cool. i like your story. it's really good :)

Omg, lol. could you messege or comment me when you put the sequel up?
if you could that would rock :D

just one question before i go back to readin.. is Aspen still with them when they go back into the house?? great story by the way im hooked!!

When I finished reading this chapter, and read 'The end.', I legit wanted to punch you. Till I read the authors note. Don't take too long to start the sequel!
<3

SEQUEL.
NOW.

Le gasp? lol It was an amazing story. thank god she didnt let Zacky off the hook that time. Girl Power! Great way to end it though :) <3333 Sad to see it go

Le gasp!!! Not the end!! I love this story!!
At first i thought that Starr was being harsh, but then i remembered what he done and i applauded her in my head! But i do wanna hug Zacky, cause i feel sorry for him...only an eency wee bitty though.... Can't wait for sequal now :3 xxx

Woo woo sequel I can't wait for it but I hated how this ended

I want to hurt Red and Zacky so badly it's not even funny! How could he do something so terrible to Starr? Gah I am soooo mad right now! You need to update a soon as possible because I'm dying from anticipation!

I seriously look forward to updates from this story. Keep up the fantastic work!

Noooo! Grr i wanna hurt Red soooo much! and same oes for Zacky! How could he give in that easily when he should know that Starr isn't like that! >:| xx

DRAMA! :O can't believe zacky what a Dumbass

bad Zacky!! wat the hell were u thinking???

poor Starr!!

i wanna slap Red!! n i hate spiders....

update again soon! :D

WTF MAANNNN!!!

I don't like Red, At all!!

Whatta bitch >=[

what the hell, Zacky is a fool!
hate that red.

Grr I could honestly set red ablaze right now with my glare. Lol I loved it. Drama is great. The only way this chappy could have been better was if Starr was in reds place hehe :))

This story. No words. I'm cursing on you for the last chapter. Please don't take too long to update again. I hate this Red character.

Please don't make Starr mad at him :( But she should kill Red however =D

Aaw...Poor Starr. Cant believe she just stood and listened to it all. I wouldve said something! Good update :)